Speaking of poetry …
I wrote the following piece, entitled “Moribund”, after visiting one of my members in a residential home, one of Swansea’s grimmer ones. I didn’t actually think of it as a poem, though it has an intra-linear rhyme scheme. Anyway, here it is.
Old age, last page, mute rage
Antique, pipes leak, joints creak
Talk sense? Long since, past tense
Dry bones, gallstones, low groans
Wheelchair, past care, despair
All day, decay, can’t pray
So bored, implored, “Why, Lord?”
Sunset, cold sweat, bed wet
Midnight, can’t fight, last rite
Just fell, such hell, farewell
Time’s curse, none worse, “Nurse, nurse!”
Deceased, released, at peace.
Kim Fabricius
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Richard 05.29.07 at 8:43 pm
We can always rely on you to cheer us up, Kim.
Ben Myers 05.30.07 at 4:51 am
Nice one, Kim. Sounds like I’ve got a lot to look forward to….
Kim 05.30.07 at 9:55 am
Hey, Ben, sic transit gloria mundi - even F&T!
ee 05.30.07 at 10:05 am
Strong rhythm - you’ll be a beat poet yet. Double bass anyone?
And working in the social care field, a useful reminder for me as to why we need to keep people out of such places. I’m glad you visit there, keep going.
Ben Myers 05.30.07 at 2:25 pm
You’ve got that right, Kim, except for the “gloria” — sic transit humilitas ephemeridis!